Post by Nina on Sept 5, 2003 17:44:17 GMT -4
Hey you guys whats up?Well,i finally desided to share my pain with ya.This here is a poem i wrote in th summer about my old friend luz.It's really emotial and i know i need hooked on phynics but it alight.LOL.Here it goes.
What A friend!
You say we'll be friends forever,but i guess that was all a lie.
Remember we where always together,but now you make me cry.
How dare you do those things to me,man i was a deer friend to you.
Now,your friends with my sister,i was such a fool.
You hurt me so much&you'll never understand.
But why luz,why do you do this to me man?
You ratter thow your life away,than be a friend of mined.
so you want to be friends with toni?Okay fine.
Don't ask me 4 nothing no more,you know how much i hate her ass.
The pain you cause feels lke you cut me with a broken glass.
Man we go back since choir&3rd grade.
You where one of my best friends,now what can i say?
We used to go places together,even if you didn't want me there.
But now your hangin' with my sister,c'mon luz that's not fair.
Man luz you know how it fells to have a broken heart,
My world is nothing now,All i see is dark.
I used to picture us being friends for a long time,but now you thow that in th trash.
Instead you wanna hang with someone that's a tramp.
Luz your better than that,i know what you could be!
why don't you like me no more,man don't you listen to me?
Memory's i have of me&you i can't earse at all.
you can't understand how it hurts,
you must have big balls.
I never thought you'll do something like this.
but now the thought of you get's me pissed.
I remember we used to go to rose's house,
even if it felted like she didn't want me there without a doubt.
Dude luz,I wish you knew that i'am better than toni,
man but i guess our friendship was just phony.
man we use to talk a lot on the phone in the fall,
Now you can't even call me at all.
You only call me when you need help,
What about toni?she ain't a good friend not even in hell.
I bet you tell her all my secrets&everything i tryed to hide,
But how she thows it in my face&my soul has just died.
Omg lucy,what did i do wrong for you to hate me so much?
You must hate me to hang out with toni who acts like a sl**.
I thought you were really something,Well before anyway.
now when we see each other we have nothing to say.
Man luz how can you back stab me&detrey me so bad?
I never thought in this world that you would make me so sad.
Thanks alot 4 runin my life,
your friendship was such a good thing to have,but now it just fryed.
I can't be your friend luz,what do you expect,
I guess you loss a great friend,a good 1 i suggest.
Oh yes luz,I'll be your friend ,
Ha,yeah right,think again.
Now you understand why everytime someone menisons your name,
i say "what a friend!"
What A friend!
You say we'll be friends forever,but i guess that was all a lie.
Remember we where always together,but now you make me cry.
How dare you do those things to me,man i was a deer friend to you.
Now,your friends with my sister,i was such a fool.
You hurt me so much&you'll never understand.
But why luz,why do you do this to me man?
You ratter thow your life away,than be a friend of mined.
so you want to be friends with toni?Okay fine.
Don't ask me 4 nothing no more,you know how much i hate her ass.
The pain you cause feels lke you cut me with a broken glass.
Man we go back since choir&3rd grade.
You where one of my best friends,now what can i say?
We used to go places together,even if you didn't want me there.
But now your hangin' with my sister,c'mon luz that's not fair.
Man luz you know how it fells to have a broken heart,
My world is nothing now,All i see is dark.
I used to picture us being friends for a long time,but now you thow that in th trash.
Instead you wanna hang with someone that's a tramp.
Luz your better than that,i know what you could be!
why don't you like me no more,man don't you listen to me?
Memory's i have of me&you i can't earse at all.
you can't understand how it hurts,
you must have big balls.
I never thought you'll do something like this.
but now the thought of you get's me pissed.
I remember we used to go to rose's house,
even if it felted like she didn't want me there without a doubt.
Dude luz,I wish you knew that i'am better than toni,
man but i guess our friendship was just phony.
man we use to talk a lot on the phone in the fall,
Now you can't even call me at all.
You only call me when you need help,
What about toni?she ain't a good friend not even in hell.
I bet you tell her all my secrets&everything i tryed to hide,
But how she thows it in my face&my soul has just died.
Omg lucy,what did i do wrong for you to hate me so much?
You must hate me to hang out with toni who acts like a sl**.
I thought you were really something,Well before anyway.
now when we see each other we have nothing to say.
Man luz how can you back stab me&detrey me so bad?
I never thought in this world that you would make me so sad.
Thanks alot 4 runin my life,
your friendship was such a good thing to have,but now it just fryed.
I can't be your friend luz,what do you expect,
I guess you loss a great friend,a good 1 i suggest.
Oh yes luz,I'll be your friend ,
Ha,yeah right,think again.
Now you understand why everytime someone menisons your name,
i say "what a friend!"
I got to get it, u won't forget it, kiss you unda ya navel, I'll go where she won't go.
I'se sowwy Nina...would've replied sooner, but what can ya do when ya own a raggedy 'puter like mine that wants to keep freezin' up or kickin' me off? 
I really need to leave the bootleg stuff alone--lol! Anyway, I love to read and write poems more than anything else and believe me when I tell ya that you worked it on this one. I like readin' the ones that others can relate to. Great job, girly! 
.I wanted to be the first one to start it off,so i did that.Should i do sum more? 
I'se got a bad memory.